2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第1篇

Dear dad and mom,

I would like to thank both of you for these years’ care and help, especially in a memorable achievement that I participated in the National Translation Contest in 2015.

This contest taught me how to make a good plan for my future, firm my belief and become optimistic and positive. Why would I say so? Three reasons could contribute to this. To begin with, facing the great competitors, I was for a time unable to look at myself correctly and objectively. It was you who encouraged me to face up difficulties instead of envying others all the time . What’s more, when I was about to give up, it was you who gave me the relevant books and suggestions to combat this battle. Additionally, when I succeeded in accomplish this task, it was you who instructed me that this contest is a process of one’s endeavor rather than the end of the world.

My appreciation to you is beyond words. I wish I could have the opportunity to repay you for your kindness.

Lovely Yours,

Li Ming

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第2篇

From the first simple but compelling cartoon we can see that a young girl is making great efforts on her schoolwork with earnest expressions, which successfully captures our eyes. On the contrary, what is differently delineated in the second photo is that a lazy boy is not reading but lying on the sofa with an unfold book and a pen on the book desk. Apparently, by the contrast of these two pictures, the explicit implication emerges in front of us that the power of good habits should be attached great importance to.

Various functions, as a matter of fact, are behind this quality illustrated in this picture out as far as I know the following two matter enormously. To begin with, scheduling is the art of planning your activities so that you can achieve your goals and priorities in the time that you have available. When it's done effectively, it helps you understand what you can realistically achieve with your time and work steadily toward your personal and career goals; In addition, here is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that it takes time to change a habit, and procrastination is a habit that requires a little bit of effort to overcome. Task aversion, distractibility and impulsiveness are common types of procrastination. And they are the easiest to overcome if we make a good schedule in advance.

Based on the afore-said discussion, it is advisable for us to take steps to carry forward the quality. All in all, it is high time to strengthen people’s awareness in this aspect. Only in this way can we make the best of reasonable scheduling and embrace a bright future.

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第3篇

笔者按：以下这篇范文，甚至含有一些“模板”的痕迹，但是对于阅卷者而言，逻辑清晰，条理工整；对于考生而言，读得懂、背得会、能模仿、写得出！范文采用“心态哲理意义阐述”的基本模板和框架，与考前公布的《2016考研金凌虹20天10大必背范文》第14页“创新”完全一致、与《考研英语(一)写作满分点金》第220页“坚持”完全一致。可见，考前背熟范文，考场灵活套改，依旧是得分的法宝；

1. Given is a set of interesting butthought-provoking pictures. In the first picture, a father who is smoking andwatching TV orders his son that “You should study hard”, with his son looking at him confusedly. 2. However, in the secondpicture, the same father is studying quiteattentively, and the little boy beside justfollows and imitates his father’s behavior. The caption below reads,“rather than making a request,one might as well set an example.

3. Definitely, the picture aims at eulogizing the significance of setting an example in family education. one thing, setting an example speakslouder than giving a word. Childrentoday tend to imitate naturally what they see from others, rather than doingreluctantly what they are told. 5. Indeed, what have been seen personally bychildren themselves weighs more than what they have been told. 6. Moreover,Jewish people, one of the most intelligent and successful human races allaround the world, can be one of the most cogent cases of how setting an exampleworks in family education: to cultivate children’s habit of reading more books,they themselves tend to read books at all times and all places.

, at no time shouldparents and the whole society overlook the power of setting a good example. , they should apply the spirit conveyed in the second picture intothe actual practice of family education. a famous saying goes, “Like father,like son. ” (239 words)

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第4篇

Write an email to all international experts on campus inviting them to attend the graduation ceremony. In your email you should include time, place and other relevant information about the ceremony.

You should write about 100 words neatly on the ANSEWER SHEET

Do not use your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第5篇

Dear Sir,

I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your help upon my entering college. You are one of the best teacher that I have ever met.

For a time, because I could not bear the heavy study pressure, I decided on quitting my study. Fortunately, I met you in due course. You are a highly intelligent teacher, perfectly able to solve my problem. On the one hand, you scolded me at the first moment and then helped me analyze my situation. You instructed me that energy and persistence conquer all things. On the other hand, you provided me with a study plan and set aside time to help me review my lessons. Consequently, I ended up with As in the test to enter college, which is much better than what I have expected. Without your assistance in giving me those brilliant suggestions and warm encouragement, I fear that I would have failed to enter college .

I would like to extend my sincere appreciation for your patient guidance and generous help. Wish you good health and happy work.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第6篇

Dear Joice,

I am extremely grateful that you have offered me great support during these years, especially when I was confused about the future.

As for me, I have ever been in two minds about studying art. However, you told me that a versatile student seemed to be more easily favored by opportunities. This greatly encouraged me! At the same time, you offered me some creative thoughts and brilliant ideas, such as setting up the study planning, enjoying a series of lectures and consulting the experts. Furthermore, it is you who find my flaws and stand by me in the darkest days. Consequently, I am sure that my chance to enjoy a meaningful and exciting life should be attributed to your enormous devotion.

No matter how difficult journey it is, you are the one who can give me strength at last. I firmly believe that we will go hand in hand and maintain our ambition and courage to face challenges in the future.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

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Dear ,

I am extremely grateful that you have offered me great support during these years, especially (关键词).

As for me, (遇到困境时的详细情况). However, you told me that (对方给予的鼓励) . This greatly (对我产生的影响) me! At the same time, you offered me (面对困境一时，对方给予的具体帮助), such as （举例一）, (举例二) and (举例三). Furthermore, (面对困境二时，对方给予的具体帮助). Consequently, I am sure that my chance to enjoy a meaningful and exciting life should be attributed to your enormous devotion.

No matter how difficult journey it is, you are always my shelter. I firmly believe that we will go hand in hand and maintain our ambition and courage to face challenges in the future.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第7篇

Notice

December 21, 2019

To ensure that students from overseas have abundant extracurricular activities, I am writing to inform you of some relevant information with regard to the singing competition.

This event will be held in the auditorium of our university on May 10, 2020, and it will start at 7 and end at 10 o’clock in the evening. At the opening ceremony, our headmaster will make clear that the purpose of the competition is to enrich the extracurricular activities of the students on campus. Participants will be from different majors in our university. Then is the time for the singing contest.

We are looking forward to seeing you there. You will have memorable and happy time in this event.

The Student Union

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第8篇

Part A

51. Directions:

Suppose you are a librarian in your university. Write a notice of about 100 words. Providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice. Use Li Ming instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

【参考范文】

Notice

For better serving the international students, a notice is released here to provide the necessary information about the library.

The university library opens at 8 . and closes at 10 . from Monday to Friday, but from 9 . to 9 . on weekends. If you need to borrow books, please follow the following steps. First, bring your student card and register first at the librarian's office. At most six books can be borrowed once from the library. You should keep in mind the days that you can keep the book(s) you borrow. Three months is the longest period. If you exceed the limited time, some fines should be paid.

If you have any questions or suggestions about borrowing or returning books, telephone or send an email to university@. We sincerely hope you all enjoy the study and life in our university.

University Library

December 26, 2015

Part B

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures In your essay, you should

1) describe the pictures briefly

2) interpret the meaning , and

3) give your comments

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points)

52、【参考范文】

The above two pictures reveal two father's different teaching methods. In the first picture, the father is urging his son to study hard while he is smoking and watching TV idly. In the second picture, the father and his son are both concentrating on the study. The caption under the cartoon reads: ^v^It is better to set an example than to make demands^v^.

Apparently, the author of the cartoon focuses on a fact that many parents when educating their children tend to neglect the impact of their own acts upon their children. It is without any doubt that all parents hope that their children could have a bright future. Therefore, they tend to count on schools and the society to provide their kids with a good education. However, what they don't realize is that parents are the first teachers of children. Parents failing to set a role model for their children will only result in an unhealthy family atmosphere, which is definitely harmful to the future development of their children.

From my perspective, education from parents is of vital importance to a child's healthy growth. Therefore, parents should provide their children with a favorable growing environment by being a positive role model. Only through persistent efforts and proper guidance can children enjoy a bright future.

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第9篇

There are, as is symbolically and explicitly demonstrated in the cartoon above, two individuals climbing a mountain, with one guy on the left wearing a bag on the back and a beaming smile on the face who is encouraging the other one, unexpectedly, sitting on the half way and wanting to give up, which indicates the importance of persistence.

Obviously, these two guys directly epitomize a prevailing social phenomenon that is in life’s journey. Some people with keen eyesight can stick to their dreams, while others, on the contrary, may easily give up despite there is encouragement and accompaniment from their teammates. Hence, we cannot overemphasize the significance of persistence, with which we can overcome all adversities and hardships in long-term life’s journey. Otherwise, we would end up in failure and live in despair. Taking basketball player Yao Ming for example, he can slam-dunk smartly because he does his utmost in pursuing his dreams and never gives his ideal up.

From the preceding discussion, it is readily apparent that persistence is a pre-requisite on our way to success, since life is a long journey, while sticking to why we start is a must to the destination. Only by making constant efforts and never stopping making progress can we expect a bright and promising future!

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第10篇

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should

1)describe the picture briefly

2)interpret the meaning and

3)give your comments (20 points)

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.（20 points）

✅解析

1.本文第一段应进行图画描述，首句总体描述，说明人物（两个不同的年轻人）+动作（做法完全不同）。第二句可以进行细节描述：一人认真学习，并说“尽早完成才安心”；一人无所事事，并说“不到最后不动手”。第三句翻译文字说明：“习惯”。

2.第二段进行意义阐释，首句点出主题：养成良好习惯的重要性。第二部分进行具体论证，可使用分类、因果、举例、正反等多种论证首段。

3.第三段可进行归纳结论或提出建议措施

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第11篇

Dear professors,

I, on behalf of the Students’ Union, am writing this letter to invite all of you to attend the graduation ceremony.

The ceremony will be held in the Sports Hall of our university on this Friday morning, from 9 . to 11 . The details about the ceremony are as follows. First and foremost, the president will make a speech for the graduates, blessing them to have a bright future. In addition, several experts will be invited to issuing certificates to all the graduates.

It would be a great honor for us to have the accompany of all of you in the graduation ceremony. Therefore, we all hope that you can spare your time to attend it and we are looking forward to your reply to tell us whether you can attend it or not on that day.

Your sincerely,

Li Ming

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第12篇

2016年英语(一)大作文并未考察很多辅导机构预测的传统文化、创新、环境保护等当年所谓热门话题，而是继2014年时隔两年之后，再次考察了“两代关系”这一当年次热门话题，体现了目前考研写作命题强烈的反押题倾向!

左图中，一位父亲叼着香烟坐在沙发上津津有味地看着电视上的足球比赛，却要求一旁沮丧失望的儿子好好学习。右图中，夜里九点钟，这位父亲和儿子均在认真学习、伏案疾书。文字说明显示：“与其提出要求，不如做个榜样。”显而易见，本图的主题是：言传身教或以身作则的重要性。

考研写作已经分别于1992、2003、2005、2014共四年考察“两代关系”这一话题，主题分别涉及：代沟、溺爱、养老、尊老爱幼。今年再次考察榜样的重要性，验证了真题在考研写作命题中至高无上的`重要地位!同时，本题也可从人生哲理方面进行阐述，考研写作已经于1994、2003、2004、2007、2008、2012、2013共七次考察人生哲理这一话题，主题分别涉及：友谊、独立、坚持、自信、合作、乐观、选择，众多范文均可使用。此外，2006年考研写作曾经考察“偶像崇拜”这一话题，本文亦可借鉴，榜样即正面的偶像。

《2016考研英语高分写作》第123、127和149页详解了2003、2005、和2014三篇两代关系类真题，171页提供了两代关系类预测范文。第125、131、133、145和147页详解了2004、2007、2008、2012和2013五篇人生哲理类真题，164、165、166、185、186、187、188页提供了七篇人生哲理类预测范文。

《2016王江涛考研英语满分范文背诵》第79、84、113、115、125、126和128页提供了七篇人生哲理预测范文，226、232页提供了两篇人生哲理类真题范文。《2016考研英语(一)高分写作终极预测20篇》46、93页也提供了两代关系类预测范文与写作框架，74、77、93页提供了人生哲理类预测范文与写作框架。《考研英语高分写作素材大全》第29-33页提供了海量两代关系类素材，127-158页提供了海量人生哲理类素材。诸多表达均可使用。

本文首段应该简要描述图画，首句进行总体描述：人物(一对父子)+动作(两图迥异)+环境(房间中)，接着进行细节描述，两幅图各写一句。第二段进行意义阐释，首句写出主题句，点出图画的中心思想：言传身教，然后可以使用因果、举例、正反等各种手段进行论证。尾段可进行归纳结论或提出建议措施。

【参考范文】

In the pictures above are a father and her beloved son. In the left cartoon, smoking a cigarette and sitting in a sofa comfortably, the father is watching a football match on TV and shouting, “Son, study hard for me!” On the contrary, in the left portrayal, at 9 . , the father is studying together with his son, both totally absorbed in their books. The caption indicates, “Instead of merely making a request, setting an example.”

The purpose of the pictures is to show us that utmost significance should be attached to practicing what you preach. On the one hand, parents teach much more by their actions, than by their words. Some of them may say to their children, “don’t say nasty things about so and so”, and then the children will hear them criticize their friends and neighbors. On the other hand, parenting is such a crucial responsibility, yet there are no required courses to prepare one to undertake this role in life. The only learning is the example from one’s own parents.

To sum up, parents are the best teachers.

Obviously, if parents’ actions don’t conflict their own words, they would have the opportunity to be outstanding examples of their children. Just as an old saying goes, “Action speak louder than words.”

2016年英语一大作文范文分析 第13篇

Exhibited in the cartoon is a sarcastic scene that sitting before a computer, a college student is choosing his optional class, wondering and pondering whether he should choose an easier course or a tougher but creative course. Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning it conveys is profound and thought-provoking.

It is beyond doubt that the painter aims to tell us that everyone, especially college students, should have the spirit of creation and innovation. To put it another way, innovation is an essential and indispensable role for anyone who wants to succeed. This can be directly attributed to the fact that one may be caught in dilemma, at least once in life. Such a dilemma may coincidentally be most difficult period in his life. Then there are two choices before him: making a creative choice or an easier one. If he chooses the former and tries to break through the barrier, difficult as it will be, success will be the result one day. However, although it seems to be much easier for him at the moment, the latter choice may kill off his dream and ambition, and such choice then will be a pity all his life.

As college student, definitely, we are facing or will face many difficulties. At such moment, we should bear in mind that creation is a necessary and indispensable quality in our life, a positive attitude to life and an approach to success. Keep the spirit of innovation, and we will win a better life.